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ETERNAL LOVE.......TAINTED PAIN<3

07:25 Sep 06 2009
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ETERNAL LOVE…..TAINTED PAIN



It is a night of dark desire…..a song of ethereal pain,

Where wolves vent their howls….waiting for some loss to gain,

The beautiful one,awakes her darkness,

And shrouds her gaunt form,

Still lurking and wanting over her lost love.





Her raven hair…..cascades over her fragile milk-white shoulders,

And her full deep crimson lips part slightly,

To taste the red tears streaming from the pale flesh beneath her,



Now the night of ecstasy…I smile vaguely.


COMMENTS

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bloodface
bloodface
19:18 Sep 11 2009

excellent poetry!!! 10





Lykeros
Lykeros
20:40 Sep 11 2009

very good





Ladydarkklord75
Ladydarkklord75
06:53 Sep 14 2009

A 10





LordLothanius
LordLothanius
07:52 Oct 06 2009

bravo very well writin.





Lordpeace
Lordpeace
10:07 Oct 06 2009

interesting





superbeast
superbeast
05:10 Oct 14 2009

Beautifully dark and erotic.





DiamondDragon
DiamondDragon
01:04 Oct 23 2009

beautiful, sensual





Karma
Karma
14:11 Mar 17 2010

Leaves me with a feeling of Dejavu, emotionally familiar. Nicely done.





ShyVampire
ShyVampire
05:12 Apr 12 2010

you give the characters in your mind a face, which i like... it makes me thirst... heheh





GawianoftheCrows
GawianoftheCrows
16:03 Apr 22 2010

nice





WaitsForTheMoon
WaitsForTheMoon
14:26 Jun 03 2010

i like it








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